The Visitor has now been re-named: The Entity...
The Visitor sounded too 'nice' and The Entity sounds more sinister - like the ghosties in the story!
I've had my first critique back of the unfinished story so will be making a few small changes based on the feedback I've had. Feedback from readers and other writers is massively important - you learn the things you are doing well as well as things you can improve on.
When you write a story it's often difficult to stand back and see it with 'fresh eyes' so other people checking it is very helpful and makes the story even better in the end.
So, with the house to myself for the night I am going to carry on writing - and probably end up sleeping with the light on tonight!
N'night all, don't let those bed bugs bite.
xxx
The Visitor sounded too 'nice' and The Entity sounds more sinister - like the ghosties in the story!
I've had my first critique back of the unfinished story so will be making a few small changes based on the feedback I've had. Feedback from readers and other writers is massively important - you learn the things you are doing well as well as things you can improve on.
When you write a story it's often difficult to stand back and see it with 'fresh eyes' so other people checking it is very helpful and makes the story even better in the end.
So, with the house to myself for the night I am going to carry on writing - and probably end up sleeping with the light on tonight!
N'night all, don't let those bed bugs bite.
xxx