I have been suffering from a vice-like pressure at the back of my head all day, and for several previous days, so when I finished work I fell asleep on the sofa. When pain relief doesn't work, my coping mechanism is to sleep!
Any way, I've received some hugely helpful, constructive feedback on The Hunter and so I will be working on a re-write for this story. It's actually great to get tips from other writers, they give you angles you hadn't thought of before... and point out your 'technical' errors (Oops!).
I hope you've all have a good day!